英語添削

僕がESLの授業を早退しなければならないので、次の宿題を前もって渡してほしいというお願いを、メールで先生に送りました。僕のメールと返信・訂正のメールです。

 

Hi ****,

Thanks for your lesson always.

I will attend next lesson on Thursday.

But I apologize that I have to leave at 7:00 PM becouse of my night work.

I would be grateful if you could hand next home works out me before starting lessons.

Aren't above sentences grammatically strange?

Thank you so much,

From ****

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Howdy!

Are your sentences strange?  A little.  Here's what I would write:

Thank you for teaching us.

I'll be in class on Thursday, but I"ll have to leave at 7:00 because I have some work to do.

Could I get the next homework before the class?

I'm attaching the vocab and reading.  It's a short story by Toni Cade Bambara about a little girl in New York City who is a good runner.

Enjoy!

 

 

ってな感じです。Nativeに直してもらうと格段に良くなりますし、自然です。

通じるけどいかに自分が未熟か痛感します。

 

(大学の敷地内、木陰で休むカモ達です。)